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The power and raw anger in this knocked me on my back, how can I do it back? Even the surfeit of questions does not detract for me, clearly rhetorical. The imagery is awesome and the final line a killer. There is nothing for me to say. I plan to do an utterly wicked and unforgiveable thing though. I am going to merge this, stanza by stanza with Mark (conect11)'s work "A Guy's Perspective" and email it to both of you. OK, I can be an evil bastard. cheers, Jess

i am new to this site and yours is the first writings that i would deem poetry. i want to see more, you give me hope that there are other true poets here. dandelion

yes and the father of the son flew too close to the sun the great god of all Male/Female My offspring my seed my great one.. ah well Yes we sob on shoulders and then away we go on our next conquest "Look what I got on my arm now!!!" and then its crash and burn ohh woe is my life I watch Jerry Springer on American Television (I am a native/scotch canadaian watching canadian cable..) and Lori and i watch females fighting for their "man" on the show... Lori says she will never fight for any male and if i want to go running off sticking it into some great godess then away i go and take my two bags of meagre belongings that i brought into the relationship with me i think Loris opinion is great Most of the guys on the show are caricatures sure but what if not THEN THEY ARE IDIOTS ha ha i laugh (but my eye corner watchs Lori) would she really let me go and bang some blonde in a hotel room and then what be all alone "Ohh Lori I am so sorry i betrayed you!! I love you i miss you please take me back my love..." ha ha ha ha ha ha ha here i sit chuckling away listening to METRIC the cd with SO SUCEXXY on it place is empty i have to bike to the mall in the rain and buy my Lori her tampons but i will I Love My Lori "Bunni" i call her and she has melted my "Masculine Image" away long ago my wax wings were the first to go cant call me Iccarus anymore!!! But yes Damn you selfish guys!! try to cry on a real mans shoulder and see what happens!!! ha ha ha ha ha okay i could be wrong real men have feelings sorry guys anyway ive probably offended too many by now not intentionally Ive been that selfish bastard so many times and you know what the woman are so kind and they take me back and do favours for me Well maybe because despite being the bastard i was also half decent too but still it doesnt count for being the idiot sorry gals your old poet Orgami !