LIFE

Will it continue? or

will it go to end?

Where is the starting point?

I can try to know but

My destined destination….?

A day may dawn with feasts and glee and

the next day may dawn reverse to that day before

Titles,car buildings will come up to…?

Girls, money and sex up to…..?

Tune your life to Him

Atleast to secure peace in death

SAKTHI RAVICHANDRAN

— SAKTHEEE2007, Jul 23, 2007

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weirdelf

18 years 10 months ago

Sakkthee you know I really like your work.

But I abhore this one. You attempt the profound without offering anything new and the last line is the worst human cop-out possible. "At least secure peace in death" Oh, your work is usually so full of life, not this morbid compromise. I can only be so cruel and harsh because I respect the rest of your work so much. You usually do much better. sorry, Jess