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Rottiestyl
Rottiestyl
Jul 21, 2007 ⭐ See this poem's read count — a supporter feature

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— Rottiestyl, Jul 21, 2007

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Region, Country: USA - Illinois, USA

Favorite Poets: Shakespeare, Emily Dickinson, Edgar Allen Poe

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dbaker

dbaker

19 years ago

HOLY SH$T!

I've a best mate from Ireland, and several cousins in Scotland that would just call this "MAD" but Brilliant! An absolutely insanse write that kept my attention all the way through! Amazing word usage. Reminded me of a modern verson of the Jabberwocky in its wierd usage of language. I loved it. By the way you don't normally hear me gush about a poem. Brilliant! Slainte! Cheers and All the Best! -DSB
Rottiestyl

Rottiestyl

19 years ago

Well now. . .

You have made my day! I was considering writing an entire chap book of stories like this. Needed to know how well it would go over. I appreciate your time. I know it wasn't a short one! Thank you! K. Mulroney
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barbsdad2003

19 years ago

Hey!

Nice play. And so nice that you let us in on the party. Thanx, Chuck
weirdelf

weirdelf

18 years 12 months ago

I hate you, bitch

god I would love to have written anything as good as this. Pure envy. Rowlings should die in her boots. This is the way to introduce kids to literature. And adults. My humble salute. Will give more constructive feedback when I have recovered. cheers, Jess

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