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this is one of my favorites. Thanx much, Chuck

even tho the tone belies it. is "Pull the wire taunt" (sic. taut) a typo or an ambiguity? just wondering. Glad to see a new posting from you, you always make me think, which I cherish as much as others abhore. cheers, Jess

you wrote this nearly a year ago it seems your last few writings have been much more lucid to me. Perhaps that is me, perhaps that is you, perhaps it's a combination of the two. I like this, even though I have been the speaker, and the subject of this work, if you catch my meaning. Because you said don't critique mechanics I will assume the offset of the poem is intentional. Is it meant to evoke something? Mark