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LC
Lenny of Cohen
Jul 21, 2007 ⭐ See this poem's read count — a supporter feature

Mouthfull

full throttled
mouth of fear
full blooded
tongue sharp words
lashing into your psyche
sweat running scared
down your face
mouth dry
heart sprinting
legs like jelly
you can’t believe
you got caught

(c)2007.21.7 Lenny Gazbowski

— Lenny of Cohen, Jul 21, 2007

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weirdelf

weirdelf

19 years ago

you barstad!

my mouth went dry and my gonads shrank with every word with every lie I ever told you are a fucking incredible poet. cheers, Jess
LC

Lenny of Cohen

19 years ago

A Barstard!!!

Many thanks for your positive response. Its a good feeling being called an incredible poet! Lenny
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Conect11

19 years ago

there are some

people who write a series of lines and they are just that - not poetry. There are some people who write good poems with no memorable lines. There are even those who write poems with great lines, but they are not great poems. And then there are poets. Glad you're here, poet. Mark
LC

Lenny of Cohen

19 years ago

Knockout

Mark, I'm knocked out by your response! It seems tame to just say THANKS, but I'm dumb struck! Jess and yourself have me lost for words!!! Thanks to you both, my fellow poets. Lenny
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poet_inside

19 years ago

Amazing you could feel the

Amazing you could feel the chase. You definately have talent, to give suck an impact with just a few words!!! Brittany

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