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Jul 20, 2007
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butterfly lover
Sea goddess,
beautiful to behold,
it has been a long time since i’v actually sat and adored u.
smooth alluring eyes like that of a madonna!
A painful joy indeed to see you.
The seas are been made to wade in a thunderous infernal.
guess what,the fishes are at ease.
The wales smiling like a burnfire.
A side as quiet and as astonishing like a polished stone.
What about the sea tortoil?
Lol! shes on her best atire waiting to behold ur presence.
I know the sun must be smiling.
Seeing your presence is more than solomon’s.
Fine fins,beautiful breast as priceless as a thousand tons of gold.
Alluring eyes that could stun the heart of every king.
Sweet fragrance almost half of our lord’s halibaster.
Oh sea goddess adieu!!!!
— ellisville, Jul 20, 2007
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weirdelf
18 years 11 months ago
this piece is astonishing to me
Quillsvein1
18 years 11 months ago
amateurish/masterful
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