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It takes 26 days to get to heaven

My angel came from heaven
though I had to give him back
Too soon for my liking
for it was out of my hands

Please let me hold him
I want to brush my lips
against his cheek
But it was not to be as he
would be gone in a few short weeks

He would not die in vain
I kept telling myself
He’d not be forgotten
on some dusty shelf

A child so small can he
really make a difference?
Oh yes beamed our lord as my
son made his entrance
 
I will always grieve for
this small son of mine
proof of these empty
arms by my side

Yes the years have passed and
the shattered dream is still there
I have proof of this each
time I hold his lock of hair

I know that he gave so
that others could live
Whenever I think of him
I try to remember this

So long my dear son
please don’t stray too far
For if you do it will surely
again break my heart…

     Christine E. Wessels
         02/09/2007

— workingharleylady, Jul 19, 2007

Critiques

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Conect11

18 years 11 months ago

hey Christine

once again, welcome to neopoet. After checking out your profile I decided to read this poem. My wife and I had a miscarriage last September and finding people who went through this makes us know we're not alone. Thank you for this. Mark
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Quillsvein1

18 years 11 months ago

a touching elegy

Each line of this poem has a heartfelt sincerity one is hard pressed to find in all the millions of "I regret.." poems out there about even the weightiest subjects now. Your heart is in this. A person can write the most labored, detailed lines about anything and not have their heart in it--yours' is very clearly pulsing here. Great job, and I am sorry for your loss.
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barbsdad2003

18 years 11 months ago

Hey There!

A great and revealing piece. Makes me respect anew the therapeutic power that comes out of the writing of verse. In fact, I find my brief pennings emotionally helpful no matter the subject. It's a mystery to me how it all works ... and so well. Thanx for a heartfelt write. Regards, Chuck PS: Another thing I've noticed is that the more honest---and well written---the piece, the more benefit I derive from the act and its completion. It's all a cosmic puzzle.

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