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apologize

I will apologize when i’m wrong,

I will apologize if i make a mistake,

but one thing i will never apologize for is

for being me,

because that is something i will never

be sorry for.

I am who i am,

and i won’t change for anybody.

I don’t care how cool you are,

who i am isn’t up for debate,

it only gets one vote, mine.

I’ll apologize if i nudge u in the hall,

I’ll even apologize if i tell a lie,

but i will never apologize for being me,

because thats the one thing i will never be

sorry for

— not like everyone else, Jul 19, 2007

Critiques

weirdelf

weirdelf

18 years 11 months ago

Go hard girl!

I admire your cool, lucid style, look forward to more of your work, cheers, Jess
C

Conect11

18 years 11 months ago

is good

in its message, unfortunately that message has been said a billion different times and a billion different ways. I still like it's pacing, though the flow is abrupt. Mark

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