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Jul 19, 2007
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Lonely
A friend need me i
as i gazed at the sun.
so mad was he
when the moon smiled
i wondered why
he’s gone!
who?
My heart is cold
my love’s sold
am waiting by the shore
my thoughts are gone with the flood
A sweet painful monster called loneliness
after much stress is trying to make me less
what manner of rest do poor me deserve?
lonely am i
without anyone to brighten my smiles
my fate is in the fog
am so lonely and wishing that i wasn’t
— ellisville, Jul 19, 2007
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weirdelf
18 years 11 months ago
A sweet poetic voice
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