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i did it well
i did it well i met a boy i loved so well he stole my heart form me and now he wants to set me, i ran strait home and cryed in bed not a single word i sed mom came home late that night, and looked for me both left and right , she ran up stares the door she broke, she found me hanging by a rope, in my jeans a note she found it read
Dig a hole dig it deep
marble stone from head to feet
and on the grave place a dove
and tell the world
i died fore love
Critiques
weirdelf
18 years 11 months ago
like I said in my greeting
Conect11
18 years 11 months ago
oh, the days of teenage angst!
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