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Jul 18, 2007
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A Travel in a city bus [DELAY]
A Travel in a city bus [DELAY]
It is the time of nine morning
with a hurry and sweat i get in
It is already overflow with passengers
My inclusion adds more problem to others
there at the moment gives whistle to move
It slowly moves instead of running
stage by stage decrease and increase it’s tickets.
With a lot of patience i am waiting to reach my stage
at last it reached that stage as an achievement in its service
when i reached my office
there the clock strucks eleven
Sakthi Ravichandran indian english poet
— SAKTHEEE2007, Jul 18, 2007
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HDGoodman
18 years 10 months ago
maybe you should check your
SAKTHEEE2007
18 years 10 months ago
SORRY I WILL CORRECT IT
barbsdad2003
18 years 10 months ago
Ravi: