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Jul 17, 2007
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Vengance Daydream. [Part One]
I explained the situation clearly to him
and he hit me in the jaw.
“Congratulations!
you have affirmed your masculinity!
I love what you’ve done with your life,
and to be honest I am jealous.
May you slip through your arsehole and break your fucking neck.”
— HDGoodman, Jul 17, 2007
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