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Vengance Daydream. [Part One]

I explained the situation clearly to him
and he hit me in the jaw.
“Congratulations!
you have affirmed your masculinity!
I love what you’ve done with your life,
and to be honest I am jealous.
May you slip through your arsehole and break your fucking neck.”

— HDGoodman, Jul 17, 2007

Critiques

weirdelf

weirdelf

18 years 11 months ago

Laughed out loud

I keep telling your life back to you? One back to you. I could fill a book with them vengance daydreams. "You calling me a wanker?" on this site is part of one. cheers, Jess

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