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Midnight Flight

The moon with all it’s beauty,

Lit up the woman’s face.

As her mind slowly drifted…

Into interstellar space.

Floating with the clouds,

As they raced past the moon.

An escape with sweet lucidity,

That ends much too soon.

She moves best in the night,

Her heart, mind and soul.

Where with peace she can meet,

For a late night stroll.

The moon with all it’s beauty,

Saved her on this night..

As she danced among the stars,

On her tranquil midnight flight.

 

 

— Terry, Jul 16, 2007

Critiques

weirdelf

weirdelf

18 years 11 months ago

I really appreciate

how the Midnight Flight is presented as the souls necessity, its saving. Ah yes, mine takes flight all too often when it's supposed to be at work. Thanks for this. cheers, Jess

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