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Ladylike

Ladylike

By: robin49707
6/30/2007

 

<!–begin story–>Fargaria ananassa awe .
View of intense capability
and goodness.
Hands that clone mine.
A heart of gentle touch
Which draws me near.
Even in absence
Just like the almighty
Daily thought but cannot verify
But sense eternal love
which lasts forever.
Standing tall with a replica
behind trying to imitate your ladylike.

<!–end story–>

 

— blueeyed bettyboop, Jul 14, 2007

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Prototype

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