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Spirit Song
Jul 14, 2007 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Withered

 

 

 

 

White roses fade

under summer’s sun.

Soft petals speak

of heart’s desire shunned.

Passion’s bloom once sweet

lie fragile

fallen in wilted retreat.

Love’s fragrance blown

withered beauty dies

 

alone.

 

 

Copyright JVS 2007

 

— Spirit Song, Jul 14, 2007
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Spirit Song

18 years 11 months ago

Thank you for your sharing

Thank you Jess for your visit and kind sharing. "Simple" Yes : ) To know where to stop is just as important as knowing where to begin. Complex rambling epics : ) not my forte'. Blessings from Hawaii, Jerry It is said there are two ways of doing things The right way and the wrong way I believe there is a third way A NEW WAY JVS

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