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Those that Fell
Those that Fell
On grassless fields
Never concealed
Men of war count, those that fell
In battle the smell
Dense in the air
Of the dead and wounded that fought with flair
Fallen for a cause dear to hearts
Brothers in arms no longer apart
Blood flows as a morning dew
Looking towards a sky so blue
Young and old matters not
Wounded and dying they lie and rot
Rotting in the futility of war
Fierce and bold
In the morning cold
Took on an army 20000 strong
Fighting for a country, somewhere to belong
The pipers pipe a lamented song
The pipes cry as the tears of the living
Their men and brothers the ultimate giving
Sacrificed on the alter of battle
Herded together as sheep and cattle
Cry not for them for they have gone
And the women sit and weep all alone
The country now free for those brave souls
At Bannockburn they did achieve their goal
As Wallace slides soulfully into history
The mans an enigma cloaked in mystery
Critiques
Fleur MacDonald
18 years 11 months ago
War is the hardest theme to
weirdelf
18 years 11 months ago
war is hard