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Lenny of Cohen
Jul 13, 2007 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Deep Nonsense In Reverse

I stare
into my steaming
black coffee

on purpose
I sing out of tune
while I only blow
balloons
up in June

nobody
is going to borrow
my thoughts

well
only if they
borrow me
the binary code
and transport me
inside the finger of god

(c)Lenny Gazbowski 2007.13.7

— Lenny of Cohen, Jul 13, 2007

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Conect11

18 years 11 months ago

I dig

the first three stanzas. They're modern, I feel them, they work. There's a sort of melodic beat jazz I can picture while reading this. The last stanza is ok, but stalls ever so slightly. A good chemical feel to this, though. Mark