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poet_inside
Jul 11, 2007 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Promised Land

Inside I hide

Looking for my inner-guide

 

Lost within

Letting go of mortal sin

 

Falling fast

Remembering the dead hand of the past

 

But now I stand

In my very own promised land

— poet_inside, Jul 11, 2007
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Conect11

17 years 5 months ago

wow

to see the progression of your writing over the past couple of years is a real treat, poet. Was going through old works and found this piece. I wonder how you would write the same feelings now... Mark W.

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