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birch limb dances to this dazzling light

great jagged cloud peaks softened by

rain are speaking

 

their language in tongues

gutteral and heavy

rolling their "rrrrr’s"

accentuation with chains of white fire

 

god creatures jumping from island

to island

 

cigarette tastes dry

when the rain tumbles

falls in slashing torrents

goosebumps on my skin

dampness on my eyelids

 

..O..

 

— orgami, Jul 11, 2007

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Conect11

18 years 11 months ago

if you would be so kind...

as to put this into context for me. For what I see are wonderful lines that float in the nether and mean nothing to me. Mark

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