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Conect11
Jul 10, 2007 ⭐ See this poem's read count — a supporter feature

The world's longest epigram

I paused in my high - wire act …………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………. ta da!…….

— Conect11, Jul 10, 2007
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weirdelf

weirdelf

19 years ago

LOL

To give you a serious and insightful review of this momentous work I must humbly beg your kind permission to offer a small piece of technical, nay structural, advice. Either ensure that it fits on 2 lines (not feasible considering different readers will have different size monitors) or insert a line break before ta. With all respect and consideration, your faithful servant, Jess
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Conect11

19 years ago

yeah

I saw my long ellipse went way overboard, even more than what I intended and was like "Woah!" Mark
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Lis Cassé

19 years ago

Feelings...

This poem really made me feel something very deep. It made me feel a deep desire to buy a new and widerscreen computer. Was that the message you wanted to send? Are you working for Dell?
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Conect11

17 years 5 months ago

no, Gateway

before they went under and laid me off! lol j/k Mark W. "An insult is just someone who hates you making a noise to indicate their hatred, a barking dog. Criticism is someone trying to help you, by telling you something about yourself that you were a little too comfortable not knowing. " ~ David Wong

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