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Jul 10, 2007
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sublimation
stirring coffee with a spoon
watching the whirling storm
within the cup
so close are we
yet distant still
as Saturns moons
dusted
cloaked
in softness
comfort in your voice
sedations in your words
sweep by me
mesmerize me
i’ll never take
that guess again
but step closer
with baited breath
the opened door
..O..
— orgami, Jul 10, 2007
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weirdelf
18 years 11 months ago
you claim to have a poor vocabulary,
stardream
18 years 11 months ago
orgami
Conect11
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cotton
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