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Jul 10, 2007
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A RAIN IN A SUMMER DAY
PLEASING EXPERIENCE OF MINE
A RAIN IN A SUMMER DAY
A RAIN IN A SUMMER DAY
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IT IS TOO HOT AND BURNING MY FACE
THOUGH I WEAR THE GLASS AND HAT
NOTHING COOLS ME EVEN A TREE CNNOT DO
MY TRAVEL CONTINUES HOURS TOGETHER
SWEATING AND IRRITATION IN MY EYES
PREVENT ME TO TRAVEL FURTHER
I CROSSED AND STOPPED MY TRAVEL UNDER A TREE
SECONDS HAVE GONE.
CLOUDS ENCROACHES THE COMPLETE SKY
GENTLE WIND BLOWS ON MY SWEAT AND ON MY FACE
FEW DROPS OF WATER FROM THE SKY FALLS
A SILVER LINE RUSHES ACROSS THE SKY
I FEEL THE HEAVEN AT THAT MOMENT
A HEAVY RAIN FALLS TO WET THE LAND
THE EARTH GETS COOL AS MY BODY AND MIND
SAKTHI RAVICHANDRAN
AN INDIAN ENGLISH POET
— SAKTHEEE2007, Jul 10, 2007
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barbsdad2003
18 years 10 months ago
Ravi: