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Alien Seduction
you entrenched me in
subliminal erotic fantasies
with alien like obscurity
then through the post
you sent me
a box of scented
pink hankies
from a distance
you were training me
to become
a lonely self abuser
I always knew
you got off on the word
Isolation
so now I’ll get down
on my bloody and scarred knees
I’ll say please
and squeeze
if you whisper me some dirty words
and make it hard for me
Then I’ll pull back my foreskin
If you let me see your rare intimacy
I’m encouraged to
be indulgent
to arouse my bulge
and with delicate slight of hand
to deliver
a spoonful of my sperm
in homage of your invisible sex
although
you never came near
and you hid
your words from me
I always knew what
actions you desired from afar
the show is now finished
and I’m eloquently spent
in body, mind and spirit
for you have crucified me
from a pleasing and safe distance.
©2007.7.9 Lenny Gazbowski
Critiques
weirdelf
18 years 11 months ago
gives the illusion of raw gritty stuff