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they are no more

I used to watch the silver

salmons race to spawn

 

upriver by the light of dawn.

 

in such a hurry, they would

cause infrequent water spray

 

in hopes they’d not miss

their spawning day.

 

now they are no more,

I’m quite sad to say.

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weirdelf

weirdelf

18 years 10 months ago

Unless highly provoked

I will no longer comment on your poems, just register a vote to let you know i have read, enjoyed, and you have made my day, perhaps my life, better. unless provoked cheers, Jess
whitetea

whitetea

17 years 11 months ago

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you're like ted kooser here.... except better.