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Dream World
i have been to hell and back
I have seen the lightning crack
I have heard the songs you sing
I have felt the love you bring
But i can’t seem to let go
I have been to the ends of earth
I have seen a new day’s birth
I have heard the words you speak
I have felt you trembling weak
But i can’t seem to tell myself no
When you speak your words untrue
When you fix your heart with glu
When you lie a million words
When you kill a mocking bird
You just can’t seem to say you know
And i know I’ve no gold
And i know i’m not bold
And i know i’m not strong
And i know that im so wrong
But i know i love you so
And i know i need you so
And i know i want you so
And i know i love your soul
Say goodbye to the real world
Say hello to dream world
This place is so surreal
But your the only thing i dream is real
But i will never know-
No i will never know
You have been in my mind
You have been lost in my time
You have been the one i seek
You’re the one who makes me weak
You’re the one who i see
You’re the one i know i need
You’re the one i love
Critiques
weirdelf
18 years 11 months ago
I like the structure
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