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Never Ending

Through the tears of rain
Through the thoughts of pain
Your name is the only thing to remain
Sweetness runs through your voice
I hear you before any other noise
Your heavenly smile
I can see for miles
Days are long with out you by my side
You are so nice and kind
I never ask friend or foe
Your the love in my heart
The sun in my sky
A day never passes
That your not on my mind
Time shall pass
But still we’ll last
Love is a never ending story
There is a begining
But there shall never be an ending
For true love never ends

— poet_inside, Jul 07, 2007

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Prototype

18 years 9 months ago

Well...

And it could be a never ending poets, for no one would be short in words to describe it. You sure did a fine job here. Keep up!

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