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What Am I

I feel your pain, what am I
I know your fears, what am I
I love the people you love, what am I
I love me, what am I
My heart aches just as yours, what am I
My happiness lies in you, what am I
My heart beats, what am I
When someone dies, what am I
I am gone because you are gone
What am I
You

— poet_inside, Jul 07, 2007

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stardream

18 years 11 months ago

what am i

wow! love it!

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