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Jul 07, 2007
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Black Walls
These black walls they make me scream
Your not there, not in my reach
So scared, so lonely
I don’t know how to feel
What is wrong, what have I done
Am I worth saveing
I close my eyes
Your the only one I see
The walls, they are my prison
I need color, I need life
Where are you, where have you gone
You left me here all alone
There’s no more me, there’s no more you
What should I do, I haven’t a clue
Hurry help me
Or I’m gone forever
These black walls they make me scream
These walls they are my prison
— poet_inside, Jul 07, 2007
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weirdelf
18 years 11 months ago
Hi poet_inside
poet_inside
18 years 11 months ago
I agree
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