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This Girl

I saw someone

I haven’t seen in a while

She was so happy

So laid back

This person

I love her to death

I wish she would come out more

For all occasions

She was smileing

So happy and bright

Her laugh

Was filled with joy

This girl

I admire her

I really do

Who whould have thought

This girl, would be me

— poet_inside, Jul 07, 2007

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Prototype

18 years 9 months ago

hey

Interesting. Let her come out more often :)

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