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Jul 07, 2007
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This Girl
I saw someone
I haven’t seen in a while
She was so happy
So laid back
This person
I love her to death
I wish she would come out more
For all occasions
She was smileing
So happy and bright
Her laugh
Was filled with joy
This girl
I admire her
I really do
Who whould have thought
This girl, would be me
— poet_inside, Jul 07, 2007
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