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Haze of a Summer Day
The haze of a summer’s day dwindles,
the air settles as crickets stir to sing.
In the shadow of the distant hills
menacing flames flare intrusively.
Stretching across the horizon
blazing ambers glowing golden orange.
Smoldering smoke rises to greet the
Stars that come out to play.
As hot breath of anger
the wind stirs and air stiffens,
natures chocking cry rises
while trees sway and bow down
to the flaming fury.
Rumbling roar of distant planes
Sway to and fro, racing to release a load
On the wall of raging flames
determined to stand their ground
against a sea of water falling down.
In the morning glow remains
Of a battle lingers.
Charred limbs stand where
Trees did flourish
now solemn and bare
bent with despair.
A heart beating loud and strong
for now it is silent and cold.
Barren wasteland is all that remains
lost is a haven to friend and foe.
Critiques
pinksheep
18 years 11 months ago
Haze .........
annemaree
18 years 11 months ago
Thank you
weirdelf
18 years 11 months ago
This is really very good,
stardream
18 years 11 months ago
haze of a summer day
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