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orgami

Jul 07, 2007 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

tassle

isnt it amazing

ill

worked so hard

its like life

in a jar

waiting for that

lid to spin

take a breath

feel the sky

naked as a thousand

lies

..O..

— orgami, Jul 07, 2007

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18 years 11 months ago

Tassle

Good title . Nice fast pace . Really liked this . The theme appealed to me more than words could express excellent pinksheep

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stardream

18 years 11 months ago

very

deep. good one orgami!

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