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orgami
Jul 07, 2007 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

circe

 

 

through cleft stone

you find me

azure and silver

gliding in your summer gown

so quick you grasp

heart and soul

your melancholy

reach embrace

 

 

— orgami, Jul 07, 2007
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pinksheep

18 years 11 months ago

your work

your work is of magical prowess . Gliding in your summer gown ,this line really transports me into another realm , just for example , keep this poetry going. I only wish that my reviews were'nt so lame and could say more. pink
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purplemoondoll

18 years 10 months ago

Amazing

I have just found this and fell in love with it straight away! awesome work!

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