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The Sword

 

A tear runs down the sword.

As it stand erect in the earth’s soil.

Shimmering, reflecting, the sunlight.

Cold and hard edged in gold.

Whose sword, whose history.

Handled in gold, and precious gems.

Lain.

Slain.

At the side of a perfect work of art.

Besides its master.

It stands a marker.

Of its neighbor.

Sir! lies regally.

Eyes open.

Staring intently into heavens void.

A soul-less relic.

The body lies.

And yet beauty belies the heartbreak.

The serenity of the moment.

The sword a fitting testament of nobility.

Lady stands her tears falling delicately.

Running in stream down the blade.

In reflection the lady looks.

At a man once loved neer forgotten.

The man no more.

The icon the sword, will live on.

— kinganeye, Jul 06, 2007

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Conect11

18 years 11 months ago

I like this

compared to "Your imagination." Well thought out with a European flair, is intelligent... and yet emotionless. It reads like something you read about in a book, artificial. Now don't get me wrong, it is a well written piece, and I am impressed with your ability to tell a story, but that, I suppose is also my gripe with it. It is just a story. Mark