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aipotU
Blasphemy consumes the simple minded
that can’t define the definition of self-progression
and usse brutal words as excuses for self-expression.
The Title ignorance
never made no sense
to the uneducated minds
of those
that never looked at it visually
never saw streets, littered with poverty
never, noticed children tryin’ to hustle their way out of reality
and come out victoriously.
See,
We assimilate into corrupted souls
WE, mutate into plants that digest but refuse to grow
SO,
blinds continue to block out jail cells, sex offenders,
twisted politicians and terrorism
police brutality epidemics of AIDS cocaine heroine and methane
BUT
is this supposed to be a sense of protection?
this is no way to lead us in the right direction
We Need to step up and form a new organization
With new alterations and modifications
Otherwise the world will always remain
tainted
unseen
and forsaken:
as a backwards utopia
Critiques
Conect11
18 years 11 months ago
a slammer's poem if I ever saw one.
weirdelf
18 years 11 months ago
oh mate
Will Searles Carman
18 years 11 months ago
AipotU
A. M. Painter
18 years 11 months ago
i WAS confused
chronecro
18 years 10 months ago
socialism
Lenny of Cohen
18 years 10 months ago
Thundering
Word
18 years 10 months ago
GRACIAS
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