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B

no reason to say

before the beauty of the sun,

before my heart was born,

your love was witnessed through many forms,

i would give my last breath,just to receive that last chance,

to truly say goodbye,but when you die theres no coming back,

this tortured boy screams so loud of the past,

i cant bare these wounds anymore,

i cant keep thinking about your world,

i cant keep wanting to bring you back for me,

because you are forever gone,

because you are deceased.

— billy, Jul 06, 2007

Critiques

weirdelf

weirdelf

18 years 11 months ago

hey billy

fuckin love most of your work. Suspect jt1 is you too or your stupid sidekick. The stupid white pseudo gangsta. You don't need him. Your work stands alone. fuck him off. now. or be fucked off. cheers, Jess

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