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Jul 06, 2007
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no reason to say
before the beauty of the sun,
before my heart was born,
your love was witnessed through many forms,
i would give my last breath,just to receive that last chance,
to truly say goodbye,but when you die theres no coming back,
this tortured boy screams so loud of the past,
i cant bare these wounds anymore,
i cant keep thinking about your world,
i cant keep wanting to bring you back for me,
because you are forever gone,
because you are deceased.
— billy, Jul 06, 2007
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weirdelf
18 years 11 months ago
hey billy
weirdelf
18 years 11 months ago
no, you can't put it off on your sidekick
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