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Lenny of Cohen
Jul 05, 2007 ⭐ See this poem's read count — a supporter feature

Cradle of Abuse

 

pornographic pictures super glued to the pavement

how depraved is your debasement?

evocative images cut into your sight.

punctuated self abuse

creating a new image of crude,

you’ve lost yourself in the mire

no singing now, the celestial choir.

you stand alone as the accused

your mind a cradle abused.

 

 

Lenny of Cohen

                               ©2007.7.4

— Lenny of Cohen, Jul 05, 2007

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billy

19 years ago

think it over

well if ur saying porn sux then u suck its the land of the free not land of restraints FUCK UR POEM
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Lenny of Cohen

19 years ago

Cradle

Heh dude, the poem doesn't sayporn was bad, whats that lurking inside your head? Lenny
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billy

19 years ago

sorry

well it just seemed that way im a sucker for jenna jameson and all of her charity deeds she does for the ill
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Lenny of Cohen

19 years ago

Jemma!

Heh Billy, no probs! I personally have no problem with porn! Lenny
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JT1

19 years ago

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beig blocked, so your responces are futile, but you have never had a Latian, if you did, Ben would never have J-Lo, and since he did, he must be a fag...no real man can look at such a flush face and say, there ae better...
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JT1

19 years ago

Poets.com

we need money, and will tell you in exchange, "you are the best poet ever!" LMAO!
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Lenny of Cohen

19 years ago

Lenny says

do you have anything of relevance to say, apart from childish sarcasm? Lenny
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JT1

19 years ago

Ah, Yes!

read it again just now, again I quote as to the tone ;child, porn, etc blah..." Bad poems come from good intentions" LMAO...Saw this the other day, "Do you believe in Santa Clause little girl?" "No, I am Jew..." Like your poem, if you are asking me if I can believe in your poetry...I am Jew...fuck Christ too! false prohphet...LOL...
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Lenny of Cohen

19 years ago

read it again just now,

read it again just now, again I quote as to the tone ;child, porn, etc blah…” and Lenny says:- were does it mention or even have a tone of child porn? I had no "good intention2 regarding this poem, it relates to a part of the human condition, thats it! Porn has been around for many years, even going back centiuries, just like prostitution.You are stuck in your own rut, you are well versed in religious terminology. Funny that, I have a poem on religion too - havent we all dear!!! Lenny

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