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walls of suffering
pain flows through me,I scream to die,
how can I ever heal with death on my mind,
I’ve got no where to go In this fucked up world,
with day after day,bare more lonelyness,
I die before I live,I live to die,
this world has brought me hell that burns my mind,
sorrow,guilt and hate,feed my soul to flames,
self poison all my wounds with torment and shame,
dreams begin to die I,ve fell apart,I’ve let the hate control my broken heart,
so this is how it ends,with our dying truth,todays another day closer to doom,
I never was alive,i’ll never be alive,
before I am deceived the night will come,
my demons will arrive and my heart will run,
I cant escape these dark,walls of suffering,
my past had foretold me,I’ve become nothing,
I never was alive,i’ll never be alive,
I pray for my wounds to heal over time,dying.
Critiques
JT1
18 years 11 months ago
I suffer
billy
18 years 11 months ago
heres a little something for u
Quillsvein1
18 years 11 months ago
Raw
billy
18 years 11 months ago
not really
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