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Journey to the otherside pt.1

guardians of sacred grounds,

show me the path,to my soul

heal my heart,heal my mind,

help me find,peace within this war,

in this world I stand before,In this world I see,

In this world Im healing through,In this world I breathe,

live on in heave,Its just something i gave my soul for,

Its just somewhere my heart can be restored,

In this world I travel through,In this world I see,

my soul floats within the sky,eternally life it brings,

live on in heaven,heal all through heaven,its just something I gave my life for,

Its just somewhere my heart can be reborn,

everybrick,everystone,I am builiding to my heavens growth,

every soul,every heart,comes together,and lives forever,

pain is no more,run through the door,

live on in heaven,Its just something i gave my life for,

Its just somewhere my heart can be restored,

so you won your battles today,I remind you,you will fight again,

and return to these grounds,find your heart and be victorious.

— billy, Jul 05, 2007

Critiques

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JT1

18 years 11 months ago

To great

submit to: "The New York Quarterly" PO Box 693, Old Chelsea Station, NY, NY 10113 You will get a letter back: "Thank you for such a great poem, will be published shortly, but did you make a copyright?"
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billy

18 years 11 months ago

nope

no id didnt so wait before any publishing but thank u for ur kind words

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