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An Impression of Walden
Paddling into the emptiness
I make my way into the clearing before me
The moon radiates its brightness
And brings light to the world below
The fireflies are like stars
Moving in the distant trees
Swirling and creating designs not known to me
In the middle of the lake I recline in my row boat
A small piece of tranquility in this world filled with war
It brings calmness to my heart
And relaxes the pounding muscles
But the measure of love forever
And the curing of heart ache
Won’t find themselves here
Clouds drift slowly by
And block the moon for a moment
But among dreams and reality
I slip into unconsciousness
And lose all grip of the world
As day breaches its silence
I hear nature stir
The birds awaken with songs to find love
And I open my eyes to watch the rising sun
In the distance I see the world in which I live in
Sky scrapers, trains, subways, buses, cars, pollution
Computers that run our lives and televisions that we never leave
Crushed dreams, broken hearts, down trotted and failures
Empty promises and thoughts of redemption
And behind me I see the world I have entered
Nature so pure it has never been scarred by humans
No chaos, destruction, wars or tyranny
No leaders of deception or followers of vengeance
Only the sky and the earth
The water and the sun and the moon
I paddle on and dock on the receding shore
I pull my small boat to dry land and walk into the densely populated forest
I watch a war of ants and see the closing statements of rain
The constellations at night seem to move in a dance as they pass across the sky
And welcome the inevitable morning
I have tasted failure, and every type of emotion
The world has turned away from me
So here, on this rock I will rest my head
And dream a world more like the purity of nature
Before man has destroyed it
I embrace you, Walden
For you have brought life back to living
And dreams back to the sleepless
Critiques
JT1
18 years 11 months ago
Good
pinksheep
18 years 11 months ago
Walden5
weirdelf
18 years 11 months ago
a lovely, sad contemplative piece
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