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bknybaby

Jul 04, 2007 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

The Soul

Sleeps more peacefully than the heart and the mind.
Only truly awoken by the tender touch of a lover
Unless of course by the searing pain of a love

Lost.

— bknybaby, Jul 04, 2007

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18 years 10 months ago

So true

cheers, Jess

LC

18 years 10 months ago

Ah, yes

a rich, evocative poem, blessed with truth. My Soul nods in agreeance, brilliant. Thanks for sharing your poem with us. Lenny

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bknybaby

18 years 10 months ago

Thanks

Thank you for the kind words. Renee

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orgami

18 years 10 months ago

elegant linger

i like the way you wrote this short but in such a manner that it remains with me even as i write this reply it is tender and sweet painful and emotive thank you

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bknybaby

18 years 10 months ago

Thanks

Thank you so much I'm glad you enjoyed it : ) Renee

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