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Lenny of Cohen
Jul 04, 2007 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

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Serious, is a disease

which slips easily

into my bloodstream.

shockingly,

I know what to expect

when I hear

my primal scream.

 

Lenny of Cohen

(C)2007.7.4

— Lenny of Cohen, Jul 04, 2007

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Conect11

18 years 11 months ago

short

simple, and I like it. I can see the italics at "Serious," but think that maybe right after that you should go back to regular font, just my opinion. "I know what to expect when I hear my primal scream" is excellent, love the line. You could even expand this and take nothing away from its character. Mark