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Rottiestyl
Rottiestyl
Jul 04, 2007 ⭐ See this poem's read count — a supporter feature

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— Rottiestyl, Jul 04, 2007

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Region, Country: USA - Illinois, USA

Favorite Poets: Shakespeare, Emily Dickinson, Edgar Allen Poe

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weirdelf

weirdelf

19 years ago

I really do love your poetry

It often leaves me with the uneasy feeling I have missed something, which makes me want to go back and read it again. The line "Ripping the spine out of her left me with calm unease." is so effectively vicious and true of viciousness. Love it, cheers, Jess
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pinksheep

19 years ago

Hard Shoulder

Loved this poem a great poem ! 5 out of 5 brilliant great truly pinksheep

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