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The Silent Grains of Sand (a parable)
Morning’s sun rising from the horizon
leisurely dissolves the blanket of mist
losing its grasp of the shimmering surface -
exposing a sea of diamonds sharing their
secrets with the shoreline’s grains of sand.
Adam and Eve - original witnesses in
a brand new world all to themselves,
found that perfection leads to vexation in the
cradle of civilization’s raw material, waiting
impatiently through vast primordial days.
Oh, the scenes these silent diamonds and grains
of sand must have visited through the millennia;
and the chronicles they surely witnessed - if only
they might have had tongues with which to speak!
The glorious sounds of old Eden -
Daniel’s cries in the lion’s den -
the tempest engulfing Noah’s ark -
the last roar … of the last … dinosaur!
Evening’s sun gently scatters its palette of
startling hues in the heavens and finally
withdraws its luster from earth’s timid grasp.
The diamonds of morning stream heavenward anew
to resume their secret dialogue and sustain once more
the parable of the silent grains of sand.
The revolving cycle is completed for now - the
diamonds of morning bask in their starry glory.
As the rising sun brings another new dawn,
the whole process of life is once more begun.
The message of the parable of the silent grains of sand
Will remain swathed in silence - shielded forevermore.
Critiques
Will Searles Carman
18 years 10 months ago
The Silent Grains of Sand
Will Searles Carman
18 years 10 months ago
The Silent Grains of Sand
Will Searles Carman
18 years 10 months ago
The Silent Grains of Sand
Mark
18 years 10 months ago
Will your poem
Will Searles Carman
18 years 10 months ago
The Silent Grains of Sand
Mark
18 years 10 months ago
Best of luck to you
Will Searles Carman
18 years 9 months ago
a parable
IKnowNoBox
18 years 8 months ago
Yes Mark ,There is a draw to this Form
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