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storm400
Jun 30, 2007 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Love Is...

                     Love is like a snow storm

                     It starts…it ends…but always comes back

                      Love is an annoying date….

                       It’s either late or too early  and always unexpected

                     Love they say is undefined, but yet we know what it is

                     Therefore love is confused because you’re known or unknown

                    NOT  BOTH! So love is retarded but has some sense

                    I assume love is for eveyone because it even found me(about time)

                    Love is not in the heart  in your mind, although your heart is where you feel it at

                   Love is shitty ang tears up our brains..but for some reason I can’ stay away

— storm400, Jun 30, 2007
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weirdelf

weirdelf

18 years 11 months ago

Hi storm and welcome

Unusually I like this, despite the theme, love poems are the hardest to bring anything new or worthwhile to. You have. There are some nice images but it could do with a little editing. Look forward to more of your work. cheers, Jess
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Conect11

18 years 11 months ago

reminds me

of a poem I wrote "Love is Dirty underwear." The all italics has me vexed, could you explain your reasoning? Unlike Jess I'm not necessarily against them, but I need to know why you chose to use them. Welcome aboard and good write!

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