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barbsdad2003
Jul 05, 2007 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

I kept at it

as to comely Kay,

I thought I’d impress her

with my new dresser.

 

but I could tell, from the way

she eyed me up and down,

that she thought me a clown.

 

but I kept at it

thinking p’raps in time

she might come around.

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Conect11

18 years 10 months ago

you could have

impressed Kay in sev'ral different ways. So here's the lesson I will teach The secret's in the speech sweet and juicy like a peach. (that last line was quite a reach!) Does your dresser have a mirror? If it does, and she's a dear then you may want to steer her dainty little rear towards a fine hand crafted beer. or wy - n - ot. Mark