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fizzness business

Ms. Fran Chise

has baked some pies

 

and opened herself up

to a baker’s business.

 

she’s licensed presently

for both coke and pepsi.

 

(I say wow!

and how?! how?)

 

she employs a soda repsi,

to her fine credit;

 

and, of course, she oft

subscribes to thirsty clients’

pocket-money debit.

 

now she has, in toto,

by assertive action, thus—

for her a necessary plus—

 

bagged some extra fizzness

for her busy business.

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Conect11

18 years 10 months ago

poem

Ms. Chise may insist that Coke and Pepsi co exist but hers is not the only soda out there. Now I tell you dearest Chuck that this poem has run amuck! And what business this man finds in your whimsy little rhymes. So I say keep it up! With this groovy little stuff, Seuss was no P.H.D but he did ok by me. (And me) Mark
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barbsdad2003

18 years 10 months ago

Thanx, Mark

I'm glad to see this simple piece is simply gettable. When simple people don't get my simple piece, I at times find that quite simply damned regrettable. Yours, Chuckles
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Conect11

18 years 10 months ago

we're all here

for each other, Pink... that and the free soda! Keep pouring, Chuckles!
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pinksheep

18 years 10 months ago

Title

Love the title its fantastic, love to hear more regards pink
Rottiestyl

Rottiestyl

18 years 10 months ago

LOLOLOL!!

I have NO idea what this poem says and I apologize!! But it has me just laughing my ass off!!! I am a diet Pepsi drinker and hate coke with a PASSION, however, if I could find just one place that would sell both instead of just coke I would be a customer for LIFe! I loved this little diddle JOE. Loosenup big boy, I don't think Dr. Suess actually ate those green eggs and ham ( you and I have had this conversation before)Barbsdad..... You rock! K. Mulroney