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so I'm digging this poem, right? And I'm reading it, kind of grooving to the flow and suddenly, unexpectedly I get to "they bear." And the flow stops cold. The following sentence looks like it belongs with the previous one, but not really, but maybe. Huh. I like your intellectual assertiveness here, and finally I find a poem about women by a woman! I like your decending scheme at the end "they are..." I am wondering if your capitalization in unusual places is intentional? Wow, this review was rambling, too early on a Sunday.

Of all the advances that many men may claim they've made in regard to women's place in their (men's) society---see how I got that in?---it's been mostly just lip service propounded to mask further inaction. And to forgo effective action. Your "A luminous fury" strikes hot. And so real. And as for the women? I don't at all blame them for feeling that way. There would be something wrong with them if they didn't. Thanx for a rewarding read, Chuck