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midair

"midair"

sealed violets fell from
the worn accordion on deck
blue eyed man, the dusted
hat leaving blank spaces–
blanket statements,
you might say

black as the rail you
leapt from, sailor
shoes damp with confetti
the threaded roses of
blurry nights picked
at random, the smell
of blossomed gin unfolding
into your ripe red nose,

No one can hide in mid-air.

i am sure that
a special waltz was
performed below deck,
young flappers and tight
lipped sailors wandering in
secret, slipping along the
bar’s rail, the jazz all wrong,
knowing it might have been
a Bridge.

i am sure that
the lashing marble
currents of the Atlantic
carried your secrets down deep
in blinking meadows of foam.

But for that moment, Hart
when you met the sky
in a seaweed wreath
you were exposed
the knitting women
bartenders and seminarians all

looked up.

No one can hide in mid-air, Hart.
Not even you

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weirdelf

weirdelf

18 years 10 months ago

thanks for introducing me to his work

excellent word painting, (I've used words like that before about your work, it does have a painterly quality) I wonder if there is something a bit judgemental about suicides, I understand them, while sharing the anger at them for depriving us of more of themselves. cheers, Jess
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Conect11

18 years 10 months ago

on first glance

this is my favorite of your writes. Strong, deep, and logical, and I'm not a big fan of poetic logic, believing that most expression comes from the gut, the emotion. I might even print this and pin it on my wall. It is, its is poignant, descriptive. I could actually close my eyes and picture it in my head, the dancing, the sea, excellent work.
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Quillsvein1

18 years 10 months ago

Thank you

Hart Crane was just a tragic lifeforce--his emotions were too powerful and his vision was too powerful. His end is a real waste, whether you're looking at it from a judgemental perspective or not. Connect11, if you pin my poem on your wall, you'll be giving me the most exposure I've had professionally in a year. Thank you!
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Conect11

18 years 10 months ago

professional?

you mean you expect me to pay you? I'm a poet, you know we don't have sh*t for money! lol
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pinksheep

18 years 10 months ago

Mid air

So many references in this poem to so many things .It sends me dizzy . You are a professional Lesley pinksheep
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pinksheep

18 years 10 months ago

Mid air

So many references in this poem to so many things .It sends me dizzy . You are a professional Lesley pinksheep