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Conect11
Jun 18, 2007 ⭐ See this poem's read count — a supporter feature

Early Work - Meditate - 1998

It occured to me last night
while lying half - asleep.
I thought:
"I know of nothing significant,
                                               limitless,
                                                               or brave.
I know of nothing vast,
                      the sky can even end.
I know of nothing infinate.
And that just bothers me."
    

— Conect11, Jun 18, 2007
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weirdelf

weirdelf

19 years 1 month ago

Joe wake up!

This was an early work. As such didn't need that comment at all. Sometimes I think you are too busy being an advocate to read the poetry. With respect, Jess
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Conect11

19 years 1 month ago

is totally cool

I think that if you put your stuff on this site you open yourself to scrutiny unless you hit the "please don't beat me up" tab. I'm probably going to be lazily posting some old stuff here over the next few, as I'm just not "feeling it" today. Who knows, though, that could change, lol!
Rottiestyl

Rottiestyl

19 years 1 month ago

This one raised an eyebrow.

This one raised an eyebrow. I guess our individual skies can end. . .here. But, slap me and call Susy, I believe in infinate. Some things like cockroaches will never end, lol! K. Mulroney

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