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Rough - Redux

I need exotic music
steel drums
and African beats
stay
rough with me
cold wet lips
and tastes, heady flavors
savor, put your hands up
put your hands on me and breathe…
I need exotic music,
the pulsating, pounding of drums and incense and love
and lust and get
rough with me
get
inside my head and halfway down my throat
taste
taste fingertips and prints and smell new scents
heady like love and sex and garlic, roasted.

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lithium flower

18 years 10 months ago

wow

I thought this poem was wow and crazy(in a good way) it just amazed me. O-U-T out lithium flower
weirdelf

weirdelf

18 years 10 months ago

fucking great!

Um, yum, this just soooo connects for me. Conceptually, linguisticly, poeticly. And very sexy. Just a play? Man this rocks. Isn't it strange that brilliance can seem to be accidental. cheers, Jess
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Conect11

18 years 10 months ago

my ego

won't be able to fit in the room if you guys keep writing comments like that, lol!